Doomroar's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fairy-wren2]

Haha well now this is conflicting this one has better colors indeed, but the other one had more detail, like leaves, and the bird looked less skinny.

But lets forget all that, are you taking these pics in a 90° angle while on top of them? because it seems like your shadow was over them, or maybe it was a really dark room?

Seriousle responds:

a bit of both, the other bird was both bad paper, and poor lighting unfortunatly, my camera on the phone is not the best and the room lighting is lacking i have a choice of shadow over all of it, or shadow over parts, i do have a scanner but i cant for the life of me figure out how to stop it from enhancing colours and completely changing the appearance in its auto adjust crap

as to the leaves, the reason i didnt do them in this picture, is i dont have a very large pastel collection right now im sitting at around 16~ and i only have 2 greens a lime green and the majority of that background you see in this picture, because prior to giving this a shot most of my works been water n ocean and you dont need many greens, 1 here or there will do just fine, so for folage on this piece i think i will wait for a slightly larger collection of greens so i can really capture the australian deep green that the leaves would have in this piece

[no title]

Dat hair.

Nersul responds:

acctually her hair look a bit different, but psssst...

[rhinoceros beetle]

I normally am not a fan of portraits, but this is one hell of a fine looking beetle! indeed insects have this surreal feel to them, and that makes them cool.

Good work BTW.

[Fairywren]

A little bit dark for pastels but still looks nice, good work.

Seriousle responds:

you are right, thats a combination of my camera not really capturing it in appropriate light at 2am in the morning, and i was very tired doing it, i also did it on terrible paper :D however! i endevour to try again with this bird, and do it justice as this was my erm 'entry' my very 1st piece doing an animal in pastels :) but thanks a bunch for the criticism its all helpful and all will go towards helping me improve my artwork :):)

[Colorful Pens]

No yellow or orange pen!?
Joking it looks really cool a pity that the store is no more.

TripleThreeTwo responds:

Thanks!

[Wave Crashing]

Now that is a nice wave.

Seriousle responds:

thankyou for the scout too :)

[Snoop Dog?]

He is Snoopzilla now...

[GODDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD]

God that shameless entity that has nothing better to do other than watching us masturbate...

ZabuJard responds:

lol oh you!

[Afro girl]

A little bit pixelated but still nice.

Technox17 responds:

yea I tried to fix it up best I could haha.... but thanks for the comment

[phantom lancer is a jerk (Dota]

Fire Spirit can overjerk him!