Doomroar's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Summoning Disaster page 9]

This is what normally happens when people get full of themselves and start talking shit XD.
Exactly a giant green blob monster eats your house.

[Inferno: The Glutton's Feast]

Man you have to give Barlowe a search, he gave that game so much justice.

[Aries Sky 5-10]

Now i see!
That is a hand!
Her hand with the black glove graving the soldiers rifle! to be more exact.

Man what a cryptic last panel, but it is easily solvable if you zoom out the image and let's us see the rest of her arm, and actually use some contrast to make the hand more defined, since as it is now it looks like the shadow of a person doing yoga.

Well nothing more to say here, everything else looks good, minus 2 starts because i can't stand that last panel, but good work overall.

Kel-chan responds:

theres an adittional 4 pages but I can fix that panel and give it more definition

[Aries Sky 5-3]

He just told her not to do her stuff... one. page. ago... i swear he is not getting laid with that attitude of his.

[Hiding in the Shadows page 4]

Yeah i don't see him making it alive out of that one.

[Hiding in the Shadows page 2]

Last panel beginning of the bubble, he is mom... he better take care of that pregnancy XD.

Anyway it is looking good really.

[Weird world in future smh]

Armed blue alien kangourous? so cool!

[Tapeworm]

Is like a bunch of electronic chips "connected" to each other, i love those kind of things.

[Duality]

Hard shading seems to work well in this style, but clusters of lines also looks nice, you will come with something.

ParcivalGodrigson responds:

Combining the two would seem best, have the line shading for soft shades where detail is still, more or less present and hard shading for the parts covered in darkness. Hmmm, I'll use that with the new style, working on something with more action this time and... horizontal as opposed to my vertical illustrations!

[Me sad]

Sad potatoes are quite convenient actually, since their tears already have the salt in them.