Doomroar's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[reuseable body part manufactur]

It better be cheap, dem companies selling second hand goods behind our backs.

ZabuJard responds:

lol. lets hope so doom sama

[Completed wall Mural]

That transition between the sea and the sky is so great, so subtle makes it look quite ample.

WVSSAZ responds:

thank you

[One-Shot: The Other Hulk]

Wait ins't Thor a woman now?

Zukahnaut responds:

Not for a few more months -- they announce those things very early so readers have plenty of time to order the books!

[Just Hanging Here]

One of the hardest streets you have ever meet!

@SkilletTom why would it be racist? he is just walking by...

polhudo responds:

:)
Haha!

[Jthm]

Hey there Nny!

[Banana-Marmalade Angel]

You forgot to mention that Banana-Marmalade is also delicious.

JJCripps1996 responds:

I did not, because he isn't :D

He tastes like rotting flesh..

[Dota 2 - Fight]

R.I.P. Keeper "give me mana" of the Light.

[Tao Pai Pai vs Son Goku]

Well the earth of that dimension didn't survived.

[Aries Sky 70]

This may be, probably just the limitations of 3D modeling, but his face is not showing the surprise and anger of this revelation for quite a while, and on the second panel he looks quite calm.

Other than that everything is working quite well, the character's speech and his response makes sense according to what we know and his environment, for example him abandoning Rion to look for his sister, and also his racist remarks work quite well taking all into account, and since we are still early on this we don't really know him that well. But yeah the expressions didn't changed that much on between panels and pages, and i don't know if that is because he has a goofy/comedic face or because of the program.

[Aries Sky 73]

This is probably the best page so far next to the map and a couple of others, and is what shows that this is such an incredibly promising story, with a great world, dynamic, and an extent background to work with, and to speculate.

While i am at this when Rion shows her powers without previous explanation can be seen as the worst page so far along with the couple following pages, why? because like other similar stories it means that what was a surprise becomes a plot device that only the author was able to know it was going to happen, which is in part why series like bleach or other shonen stories start degrading themselves as they put more and more nonsense without a real base to hold themselves on, for example and this is very common, the main character uses an ultimate technique that was being developed in secret but no one ever saw any hints of such move or of the training for the move, as this is a story that is just starting we can overlook this happening because things are still being just introducing and the world is taking shape, so a lot can happen. But! since this is so common specially in the world of comics, i can't help but to make emphasis in this warning.