Doomroar's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Aries Sky 5-10]

Now i see!
That is a hand!
Her hand with the black glove graving the soldiers rifle! to be more exact.

Man what a cryptic last panel, but it is easily solvable if you zoom out the image and let's us see the rest of her arm, and actually use some contrast to make the hand more defined, since as it is now it looks like the shadow of a person doing yoga.

Well nothing more to say here, everything else looks good, minus 2 starts because i can't stand that last panel, but good work overall.

Kel-chan responds:

theres an adittional 4 pages but I can fix that panel and give it more definition

[Duality]

Hard shading seems to work well in this style, but clusters of lines also looks nice, you will come with something.

ParcivalGodrigson responds:

Combining the two would seem best, have the line shading for soft shades where detail is still, more or less present and hard shading for the parts covered in darkness. Hmmm, I'll use that with the new style, working on something with more action this time and... horizontal as opposed to my vertical illustrations!

[Valentine Sprite!]

Yeah after too many boobs hands do get tired of boobs ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

Mataknight responds:

ikr

It's like, for a little while, you just don't want to deal with them.
You don't even wanna look at em for the rest of the day. Although
I have the same feeling with hair movements since hair is a bitch
to animate. '_'

[Dental Care]

Maybe that is what he is going for, a pestilence kind of spell XD.

ShadyDingo responds:

Haha well I think he nailed it then XD

[Wizard's Props]

I like the book and the necklace the most, the book has a futuristic necronomicon feel to it, and well the necklace screams of lovecraftian lore.

Kendraal responds:

Thanks for the feedback! I was aiming for a fantasy/ horror feel! I'm glad you like them!

[Gathering Courage]

Great style! i would really like to see more from you.

ParcivalGodrigson responds:

Thanks! I'm working on another big one as we speak, otherwise I've got a bunch of lesser ones on my profile to check if you're interested.

[Chaos Logic]

You could delete the extra blank space at the end and it would look way better, also clean the pencil traces.

Mullemuh responds:

Ok
Thanx^^

[Those are Mine!]

Ah my internal fanboy approves, do God Usopp next!

Mullemuh responds:

what an awesome Idea
I will do him next^^

[From Deep.]

Can't help but think of Ultraman while looking at this, it must be the crest.

amejia1924 responds:

Yeah I think it's the crest and the color.

[Mother & Son]

So this is pretty much the female version of Saturn devouring his sons, quite good actually.

RobStanley responds:

That was the original idea! :)