Doomroar's art Reviews on Newgrounds

["Talon" Ezra]

I can definitively see her mouth, i can also see that she has a bit of a pompadour going on there, i can dig it, Space Dandy is putting it back on the map, so it is cool.

However what is the deal with that big black bar on the right side? it is a column or a wall or... what is that? it is so distracting and completely unnecessary, why is the character not in the center? i actually refreshed the page twice because i thought that it was not loading well.

Kel-chan responds:

It's a scene from the opening - the black bar will have white text on it- and the character will be inked like a manga drawing. I might also put a graphic where the red is but i dunno

[Behemoth & Lindworm]

Damn man all those details are awesome! from the severed dragon head to the face of the giant, passing by the staff made out of a tree and a villager, haha and he is steeping on another unfortunate human, that King Azreth had no idea of what was going to come.

HongKongBong responds:

Great review as always, you always spot my little details! Thanks man.

[Girls]

Tricky question, it is the same girl with different outfits! so all of them.

FASSLAYER responds:

they are differnet girls XD.

[Gordon riding a bear]

Modafoka Gordon Freeman riding a modafoking Bear!

Rhunyc responds:

You betcha!

[Comic Book Art]

It reminds me of Digimon, when the Digital World starts to invade the human world.

BushidoArts responds:

It's quite sad to say that even though I've been watching Digimon for the entirety of my childhood, I can't remember much about it :/

But if it does, then hey! Perhaps these ideas all stay in the head somewhere.

[Floating Sci-Fi City]

There's that certain charm that floating bodies of earth have that just keeps your eyes stuck in them looking, great job.

BushidoArts responds:

Thanks! Always is a useful thing, but it's quite generic as well. I try my best to improve my illustrations the next time I get a hold of my mouse and laptop.

[Aries Sky 5-10]

Now i see!
That is a hand!
Her hand with the black glove graving the soldiers rifle! to be more exact.

Man what a cryptic last panel, but it is easily solvable if you zoom out the image and let's us see the rest of her arm, and actually use some contrast to make the hand more defined, since as it is now it looks like the shadow of a person doing yoga.

Well nothing more to say here, everything else looks good, minus 2 starts because i can't stand that last panel, but good work overall.

Kel-chan responds:

theres an adittional 4 pages but I can fix that panel and give it more definition