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[I hate this drawing (why did you frontpage it???)]

I love this drawing why didn't it got frontpaged sooner???

Urichov responds:

Thank you. I genuinely am still confused by this, but I'm guessing someone suggested it on one of the Newgrounds Discords or something

[Upgrades]

The real question, is the coolant edible?

neurodyne responds:

Its has a minty taste though.
https://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/neurodyne/upgrades-ii

[Rubber vs Mochi]

I think if you play around with Luffy's powers, maybe have him in the middle of hitting culvering or king cobra, you can add a really good effect by having his attacking arm stretching everywhere but still being in the same position of being about to attack, rather than having him just posing, so his arms can be in the same place, as they are but by changing the point of origin it will look even better.

As for Katakuri you could add his floating donuts and extra arms in the back ground, that will also add more intensity to the image and show how incredible the battle was, which would among other things show off their powers effectively portraying that it was not just a brawler match but truthfully a face off between ability user.

Those 2 things can add to the dynamism of the image, without you having to modify their poses or most of the drawing since they would happen in the background, the biggest edit would be to Luffy's attacking arm since his fist would have his point of origin off frame instead of connecting at the elbow since he would be stretching like on the actual fight.

Anyway great image, i don't think the poses actually look stiff, they just look normal, which is only a problem because their fight was far from normal.

BadTyke responds:

Oh man I really had something like that in mind, especially the floating donuts but I kinda didn't like the way I drew them and was a little too complex for me at the time so I decided to make it more basic. Nevertheless I really should've bumped up the action with some crazy devil fruit feats!

Thank you for your honest critic! I'll make sure to work on the action dynamic poses next time!

[Oden]

He was born to boil!

wellie responds:

rip to this man

[Mashiro]

Is that the one that kidnaps a guy in a time-warp cellar and puts him in a timeloop?

Edit: oh shit, then be aware she is crazy, you may regret some stuff.

CruorVolt responds:

Yes.

[Everything looks like a nail]

Imagine how thicc this woman is, her breast so bog that the plastron has to be designed in order to accommodate space for them, her ass so voluptuous and her thighs so prominent that she couldn't wear a cuisse.

She is clearly a space marine, or is kind of wearing the armor of one, for the colors and the skulls, you could deduce that she is a Chaos Marine, probably for the legion of the World Eaters since it is red and there's a bunch of skulls.

However the way in which she wears her armor, and how this is particularly designed to accommodate her curvaceous proportions, suggest that she is more fit to serve for Slaanesh on the legion of Emperor's Children.

But then why red and not purple? Krhone doesn't steals troops he kills them along with his rivals.

So whats the story here? i am curious now.

BlankEye responds:

I admit that I took inspirations from the World Eaters when designing the armour (and skulls), but she is not part of the Warhammer universe!
She's a species of my own make, a sort of ogre-like fire-worshipping industrialists called "Karkadians".
They tend to be quite rotund, as they might devolve into ghoulish cannibals if they start to starve!
Thank you for the comment!

[Monster Manual Page 8]

I can already see a party getting fucked over after opening a bobby trapped door or chest and having a jar explode with this thing in there, then being forced to fight it in a small corridor.

I hate it and love it.

I call bullshit on the monster challenge 2 tho.

Hyptosis responds:

Think it is tougher than that huh? We can always change it, noted on the list. ^_^

[Gravehill - Chapter 05 - Page 22]

How kind of them to let him enjoy his cigarette.

SeventhTower responds:

What ever killed him must be pretty polite

[Gravehill - Chapter 05 - Page 13]

He reminds me a lot of Dope Ryder, minus all the weed of course.

SeventhTower responds:

I just looked Dope Ryder up! Haha Its pretty funny!

[Gravehill - Chapter 01 - Next Chapter Preview]

Well consider me thrilled!

SeventhTower responds:

I'm glad!